When people write it's usually because they can't think of anything more imaginative.
It's good to be open minded, but it would help to list a few things that are important to you.
I'd leave out the bit about being manly and having nice biceps as it may make decent guys think they have no chance. You can't sit back and wait for the men to wink or contact you.
You'll be pleased to hear that I think you have a pretty good profile.
You look good in your photos and have clearly taken the time to write an interesting profile.
Unless there's a reason for it I'd suggest you change it. You look fun and presentable in your album shots too so all good choices.
Interesting Fact: Your Fact is OK but the "you'll have to find out" comment isn't enough.
I can see you are getting a lot of interest, so something is clearly working. However, you've asked me for help..here are some suggestions: 1) You have a good selection of photos, but some of them are quite dark/blurry when you look at your album.
2) You say you enjoy all those activities, but there is no evidence of this in your photos.
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